Marscael's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[Suffer]

So I actually really liked the beginning of the song. However the drums don't really fit very well imo but I can't figure out how to explain why. Otherwise though this is a decent spooky track. And I wish the beginning kept slowly growing in intensity.

FantasistEldrun responds:

Thank you for your comment ! Obviously I never really have been into spooky songs, so... I havnt been so inspired. Anyway, I see how to improve now !:)

[Dominate]

Ok so Dominate has some interesting sounds but it's kind of repetitive and nothing really blends in very well. But I do like the drums. You seem to be pretty good at that.

FantasistEldrun responds:

Thank you :)
Many said that I had a nice sense of rythm ; All I'd need is to find my own samples. But... How ? Thats my preoccupation right now

[Roller - Soon finished]

Well I liked that strange noise that happens at 1:40. Nice, casual song. I'll say maybe the first half of the song could use a very subtle synth or something like that to compliment the atmosphere of the second half of the song.

FantasistEldrun responds:

Thank you again :D

The goal was first to make a rap instrumental, but somehow it growed bigger and bigger... Now I dont really know what it is ^^'

I will try to work more on my songs from now

[Memories]

It has a strange vibe. Can't quite put my finger on it. Like how it makes me feel. But it is a decent song. I think my favorite part is the horn(?) instrument that shows up at 1:35. Keep it up my friend :)

FantasistEldrun responds:

Thanks !

[The Deep Purple Sea]

Ooo I really like the part at 1:56 nicely done my friend. Ends a little abruptly but everything else in this is clean if you know what I mean. good work

PigeonMusic responds:

Thanks for feedback!

[Nowhere]

This has a nice atmosphere but would be cool if there was more sounds in it.

NoLifeSadly responds:

Thank you for your feedback! I will definitely try to make my later music a bit more complex and less repetitive :)

[ocean of acid]

Imo some parts sound similar to Joji. Haven't listened to him since smithereens released but there were points where I could imagine his vocals coming in. I guess it's parts like at 3:00.

Also man is this album almost done??? I can't wait to hear the finished result.

crispybatteryacid responds:

Not even close to done, no. Gonna be a while lol, sorry! Thanks for stopping by.

[Not Even Pesticides]

I love the ominous sounds at the end and how the song like glitches out at 1:43. the beat was kinda repetitive tho but honestly I don't think that takes away from this song much. Good job man

[Nun theme (Horror music)]

Sounds like it could use more instruments but what is there sounds real fresh and works well with each other so I like it!

[A Figment of Your Imagination]

Sounds like your style is changing and I'm excited for you on that. This was a really refreshing track in that sense. And i would love to hear more like this.

crispybatteryacid responds:

I like trying new things, but I'll always go back to my roots. After all, I am a DM Dokuro clone :skull:

Thanks for the review!